commitment [written april 2006]

commitment
a risk
are you willing to take it?
possibility
of pain
hurt
corruption
maybe lies and
broken hearts
opportunity
for love
worth
joy
maybe kisses and
warmed hearts
commitment

a risk
are you willing to take it?
are you ready to leap

close your eyes and pray
let go your defenses
let him in

are you ready?
can you commit?

commitment
a risk.
commitment.
deep breath, close my eyes, jump.
please catch me.

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2 thoughts on “commitment [written april 2006]

  1. I love this. Particularly the word design and simplicity. And the fact that you are committing even if he doesn’t catch you. Beautiful.

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  2. jingle says:

    very creative piece.
    divine talent…

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